In addition to law and language generally, this blog explores philosophy, translation, poetry (including my own poetry and translations), legal education reform, genealogy, rhetoric, politics, and other things that interest me from time to time. I consider all my poems and translations flawed works in progress, tweak them unpredictably, and consider the latest-posted versions the latest "final" forms. I'd enjoy others' thoughts on anything posted. © Harold Anthony Lloyd 2024
Saturday, February 23, 2019
Fantastic Cognitive Emotion & the Law Symposium Held at Wake Law 2/22/19
Many thanks to the thoughtful speakers and Wake Law Review students who made possible this engaging February 22, 2019 symposium on the inseparability of emotion and reason in legal and other reasoning. The symposium volume will be forthcoming. Read more about cognitive emotion and the law here.
Sunday, February 17, 2019
Miscellaneous French Verse Translations
When translating verse, I think one should try to capture both the form (meter, line positions, rhyme scheme, etc.) and substance to the extent possible and to the extent not cumbersome* in the new language. "To the extent possible" can require much work that I think is often missing from much translation. I also think the original should be printed on the opposing page so the reader can judge the success for herself.
*Where end stopping or alexandrines, for example, seem cumbersome in English, I would think the original poet would want substitutes that distract less in English. Thus I've often used iambic pentameter in lieu of hexameter. I've also often avoided end stopping where that seemed a distraction (my translation of Phaedre for example).
Here are the English pages of some of my dabblings along these lines. I
think the Veraline & Du Bellay present especially hard challenges
and I keep tweaking......
I. Verlaine: MacIntyre claimed: “No one has ever translated, or can or
will translate [Chanson d'automne]; yet it offers the supreme challenge, the
shifting lure of the bright impossible.” Maybe MacIntyre didn’t try hard
enough?
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